Burned out
My heart it burned with a thousand flames
The purist moonlit nights could not compare
But time has passed and I'm lost in the names
I'm transfixed in the dark with an empty stare.
How can I remain within arm's reach
When you won't look me deep in the eyes
The length of time that I must bleach
Within my pain and my awful cries.
You looked upon me a moments grace
Made me happy beyond life compared
But you've gone and disappeared without a trace
Only after i've stayed and all is bared.
Am I such to live a lonely life?
To wait for you till a whim sets right?
Overlooking my constant strife
In hope to see a greater light?
In truth, my heart with you remains
Though not sure what it's all about
With you my pain and blood it stains
As my passion has burned out.
Live your life as you've thought it fit
I just can't go on living ignored
But don't be surprised if you get bit
Knowing it's only you I adored.
I've waited, waited far too long
I'm like the candle burning through the drought
Now I've reached the finale of my song
My heart it's gone and burned out.
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another poem, only thing I seem to be able to do decently
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beared =bared
wim =whim
GRAMMAR NAZI(tm) wuz here.
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An interesting conversation with me and a friend.
Friend: I'm a Master debater and I'd love to get into politics.
Me:........ *refraining from laughing*
Friend:... okay... how about you?
Me:You've inspired me to be a critic!
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Xukat #228- 'The Exuberant Narcotic' of *Org-infinity
6 people have joined me Bum Pirate crew! Will you?
Come to meh chatroom plz!
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98% of Deviants cannot tell the difference between 'your' and 'you're'. If you're one of the 2% that wants to punch 'em on the nose, paste this into your sig.
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An interesting conversation with me and a friend.
Friend: I'm a Master debater and I'd love to get into politics.
Me:........ *refraining from laughing*
Friend:... okay... how about you?
Me:You've inspired me to be a critic!
I can also see why you wouldn't like it. I have the same problem with remembering scenarios, but I think of it as a learning curve. These were your feelings and maybe by looking back on it, you may learn to understand what really happened in those hard times.
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98% of Deviants cannot tell the difference between 'your' and 'you're'. If you're one of the 2% that wants to punch 'em on the nose, paste this into your sig.
The big one that relates to me is that I have a random recollective memory. In other words, I still recall instances from.... as far back as when I was 6 years old that can be irrelevant to today and to many.... foolish. Mentally, my mind actually relives the events though I don't physically experience it. I don't actually think the event is going on, but everything I felt at the time of that event I feel over again as if it just happened. It's why I dislike my connection to the poems. Don't get me wrong, I still like to write them, I just grow to regret writing some of my more..... upsetting pieces that connect to me. I still love them and wouldn't delete them, but they do get to me too.
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An interesting conversation with me and a friend.
Friend: I'm a Master debater and I'd love to get into politics.
Me:........ *refraining from laughing*
Friend:... okay... how about you?
Me:You've inspired me to be a critic!
Your memories are hardly foolish and to be connected to them so strongly, especially from what I gather to be some particularly turbulent times, must be painful. I don't know if I can understand that, though it certainly doesn't distance me.
How often do you go back to read your old works?
Maybe what provokes such a strong reaction is the fact that the issue in hand hasen't been thoroughly worked through?
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